Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Significant Struggles of Santiago

Everyone has struggles that they have to face. Life is full of it and they are inevitable. Overcoming these struggles do nothing but make us stronger. In the Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway, the main character Santiago goes through several disparaging obstacles that include his old age, the unsympathetic sharks that sabotaged all his hard works, and the huge marlin. He conquered them all with determination and strength.

The first and foremost conflict that he faced was his age. As people grow older, they get physically weaker and can’t do things that they used to when they are younger, they also develop conditions such as hunched back and cramps, and finally, fatigue. Old people get worn out really easily because their body isn’t as fit and healthy as they used to be. Santiago is about eighty years old so fighting a marlin isn't exactly easy to do. His left hand cramps up often (and he calls it a curse) so he has to rely on is good hand to keep a grip on the marlin. Santiago hasn’t slept in three days so he is exhausted. He may not want to admit it but he knows that he is. “You’re tired old man…You’re tired inside.” (112).


Another obstacle that he faces is the marlin itself. The marlin is so enormous that when it came out of the water, it came out "unending and water poured from his sides...his sword was as long as a baseball bat and tapered like a rapier...[and had] a great scythe-blade tail." (104). the marlin could easily dive and pull Santiago under or diver and kill him. Fortunately, it did neither of the things and allowed itself to be caught. Even though he wanted to kill the marlin, he was resentful when he did because he didn’t think of it as just another fish in the sea, but his own brother.

What killed Santiago the most on the inside were the spiteful sharks that sabotaged all his hard work. They wounded his pride because the marlin was the first fish nearly a thousand pounds that he had caught all by himself and he was proud of it. "Eat that, galanos. And make a dream you've killed a man. “(119). He worked hard fighting for it and now it was destroyed to the point that it was barely even recognizable. When the skeleton was just lying around, waiting go return back to the ocean, people passed by it and though that it was just a mere shark, not a noble majestic being that once swam the great seas. “‘What’s that?' she asked a waiter and pointed to the long backbone of the great fish that was now just garbage waiting to go out with the tide...'I didn’t know sharks had such handsome, beautifully formed tails." (127). Santiago was disgusted by what the sharks left behind and wished that he had never went out that far into the sea and caught the marlin. Atleast the marlin would still have its dignity. The sharks, in a way, are symbolic of the people who try to bring someone else down, just so that they would feel better about themselves. The sharks killed Santiago’s pride just so that they could get a little something to fill their belly.

Conflicts and struggles must be overcome with fierceness and strength, just like Santiago when he was fighting the galanos. "I’ll fight them...I’ll fight them till I die." (115). Even when you fail to do so and everything seems to be falling apart, be optimistic and think of bright side, because with everything that turns sour, there's always a hidden goodness. You just don't always know what it is. When the sharks gorged on the marlin, he was devastated and felt hopeless, and even though he proabaly didn't want to do anything but grieve about his lost, he still tries to be positive. "Think about something cheerful old man...every minute now you are closer to home. You are lighter for the loss of forty pounds." (104).

5 comments:

  1. 1. The thesis is that the old man had to face many struggles in life such as old age, the sharks, and the marlin. Calling the sharks unsympathetic and saying they sabotaged the old man's work helped the intro. to be more attention grabbing.The fact that she also made the point that life's struggles only make you stronger is a good point.
    2. I really like the quote that Anna uses to describe the marlin's size. It's very descriptive and helpful to the paragraph. I also like the quote about the old man's age. I didnt notice that quote before and it's original and very clear and to the point of the paragraph.
    3. This essay has a very good flow to it and that makes it easy to read. The word choice is also very good. Anna does a good job at explaining the quotes and struggles that the old man had to face. "His left hand cramps up often (and he calls it a curse) so he has to rely on is good hand to keep a grip on the marlin." I like that quote because it uses a solid example on how old age affected him.
    4. One thing a little confusing about this essay is the shark paragraph. It seems to focus more on a summary, like explaining how the people thought that the marlin's skeleton was a shark's. The conclusion should also focus on the other struggles not just the sharks too.

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  2. 1. In the Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway, the main character Santiago goes through several disparaging obstacles that include his old age, the unsympathetic sharks that sabotaged all his hard works, and the marlin. This is the thesis and it is very clear to the reader. We now know what the essay is going to be about.

    2. The best quote, in my opinion, is: The marlin is so enormous that when it came out of the water, it came out "unending and water poured from his sides...his sword was as long as a baseball bat and tapered like a rapier...[and had] a great scythe-blade tail." (104). It really was interpreted into the essay very well, and it helped explain the argument very well.

    3. I really feel that this essay doesn't have a weak spot. it has plenty of quotes and they fit and supported her points very well. The introduction was good, as was the conclusion. the essay stayed on topic the entire time, and made sense with proven points and good quotes.

    4. I believe that the best part of this essay would be the use of quotes. They are used well and put into the essay what seems as though effortlessly. The essay, overall, was very well written and points were very well explained and supported with quotes.

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  3. 1. The thesis is that Santiago went through many things like old age, the unsympathetic sharks that sabotaged all his hard works, and the marlin. The word choice was very helpful in understanding the thesis.
    2. I agree that the best quote was the one used to describe the marlin's size: "The marlin is so enormous that when it came out of the water, it came out "unending and water poured from his sides...his sword was as long as a baseball bat and tapered like a rapier...[and had] a great scythe-blade tail."
    3. The word choice and flow of the story was very well done. Explanations were clear and detailed.
    4. I agree with Kaitlin about the shark summary. It did seem more like a summary than an analysis. But other than that it was a really good essay.

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  4. 1) Her thesis was about struggles and obstacles, and how overcomming them can do nothing but make us stronger. I think it's clear, and concise.

    2) I really liked the last quote she used. I thought that it stood out above all the others because it really closed the story well, and it connected with everything.

    3) I think that Anna's quote choice was really awesome. She had a really good selection, and she also had really good organization in her essay. It was great overall in general.

    4) There's some grammar issues, but other than that it's a great essay. Great Job!

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  5. The thesis of the essay is that everyone has struggles that they have to face and it was clear because it was one of the first sentences in the essay

    "'I didn’t know sharks had such handsome, beautifully formed tails." (127)." This was the best quote because it emphasized that the marlin was significantly larger than most.

    I think that the essay's introducion is done well because the author explains her thesis very well. "the main character Santiago goes through several disparaging obstacles that include his old age, the unsympathetic sharks that sabotaged all his hard works, and the marlin."

    I think that the author could work harder on description or some humor to make the essay more attractive to the reader.

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